This photo was suppose to be about a girl holding an umbrella and then being blown away, pretty self
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| In this picture, Shantae is first enjoying the smell of flowers and then being attacked by bees in the second photo. |
Model: Shantae Smith
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| The last picture is my favorite, the concept was suppose to be the competiton involved in dancing, like any sport there will be people who are jealous of your talent, so in the first one the girl is going on with her performance while the second girl is glaring at her for being so good. Model: Ayana King |
In the first diptych, I like the idea but I think it would be better if it was shown why she is being blown away and why she has an umbrella. There is nothing that resembles rain. Another thing that would be good to include would be to show her hair blowing in the second picture so it looks more realistic. Also with the second picture, you are able to tell where you scaled it on the right and it’s a little too bright compared to the rest of the backdrop.
ReplyDeleteI really like the idea you had for the second one and I liked how you later added the bugs during editing. I think if they were smaller and the placement was different they might seem a little more realistic but overall I think it was successful.
For the third diptych, I think the model plays the role very well. One thing I don’t see is what is the before and after factor of this photograph. It is just two pictures of a girl dancing. But separately the photographs came out successfully and captured her well.